after class update
here is my motion graphic after class. I worked on adding some new content but also getting more of my illustrations drawn for things down the road. pun intended haha
First Draft
I have recently finished my first draft. I have lined u the words and done some slight transitions and styling. I would love to try and push it more and make it more immersive and powerful. I feel that may come more in the transitions. Let me know if you have any feedback. Always open for it!
wow! I love the illustrations so far--they feel very cohesive. I'm excited to see this come together! I'm a little confused about the sequence and message of the psa so far, but I'll trust the process.
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I love how the seatbelt pulls the next scene into the frame. Have you considered making the seatbelt blend in with the road. I’m not sure if that makes sense but if the seatbelt transformed into the road, it could aid your concept by encouraging viewers to immediately associate being on the road with wearing a seatbelt. I think my only other critique would be regarding the “Safety is Key” sign. I like that the sign references road signs, however it feels a bit large in the frame and I think you lose the road lines that suggest movement in the background. Maybe removing the sign post and scaling down the sign could help the implied driving motion stand out more. Overall, I think you’ve made a lot of great progress!
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